After reading your introduction and watching the video you guys made, I gathered that you were trying to prove that everyone has different literacy backgrounds and that these backgrounds can and should be different because otherwise everyone would have the same set of guidelines and writing would not be as unique. I really like how you incorporated a video into your project with six different people's response to your questions. You did a good job adding a librarian's background to your video because then your answers weren't limited to a college student's perspective. I think you should add a little more to your website, such as the conclusion you made. Other than that, I think you did a good job. Try adding a little more to it and it'll be great. Good luck on your final draft!
After reading your introduction and watching the video you guys made, I gathered that you were trying to prove that everyone has different literacy backgrounds and that these backgrounds can and should be different because otherwise everyone would have the same set of guidelines and writing would not be as unique. I really like how you incorporated a video into your project with six different people's response to your questions. You did a good job adding a librarian's background to your video because then your answers weren't limited to a college student's perspective. I think you should add a little more to your website, such as the conclusion you made. Other than that, I think you did a good job. Try adding a little more to it and it'll be great. Good luck on your final draft!
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